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His clothes are old and dirty,
Tattered from hours of hard work.
His skin is marked and rigid,
Where veins of iron lurk.
Sometimes in conversation,
He forgets just what to say,
And with a laugh that breaks my heart,
"I'm getting dumber every day".
His footing is a little weak,
And he cannot walk too fast.
A body now in pain,
From excitement in the past.
But this man now victim,
To shifting sands of time.
Is the greatest man I've ever known,
Deserving more than simple rhyme.
A man carved of strength and steel,
And polished gently with the shine.
The shine of kindly wisdom,
Seen from his eyes in cups of wine.

He's my father and my hero,
He's the man I want to be.
And though I cannot match him,
The only hope for me,
Is that I've made him proud somehow,
And he knows just what I see.
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This is a poem I started working on for my father a few weeks before he passed away. I never reopened it or worked on it again, so this is just how I left it.

His name was Charles M. Williams and he passed away on June 3rd of this year from heart complications made severe from not taking his medication. My mother divorcing him in 2005-2006 didn't help things either.

I made two longer posts about it on the blog that he had been posting on for three or so years, so if anyone is interested in more details, feel free to check the link at the bottom.

I wanted this to see the light of day, even if he never got to read it. The ending, I think, carries an appropriate twist to fit in with the rest of my poetry now.

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I'm sorry for what happened to your father, but from what I saw on the site he seemed to be a nice person , an active one that's for sure ( really liked the motocycle picture :D ). I think I can see where your inspiration came from for this poem , yet what you say is almost universal for each of us thinking of our father. "He's my father and my hero/ ... / The only hope for me/
Is that I've made him proud somehow/
And he knows just what I see." ... simply beautifull :)
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