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We swallowed the path home
Because we were hungry,
Though starving is an ongoing
Story, an empty bag
Dancing in the streets,
Full of an unfastened voice
Walking through the house,
Wind unchained, heart admonished.

Heaven fills its eyes, crawls away,
That sleeping boat content to follow
The vacant waves, intervals
Of dying that we dare not interrupt,
And we watch the kind ear shrinking
From our charcoal docks; heaven
With a full stomach crawls away.

This is what we were put here for.
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Our Duty by *MineralAccident ( Suggested by LiliWrites and Featured by DorianHarper )

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LiliWrites Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I've used your brilliant piece in a title poem, found here: liliwrites.deviantart.com/art/…

I hope you don't mind! :heart:
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HolyHeroine Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Couldn't have said it better...
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MineralAccident Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Student Writer
Sometimes that's what we're here for. To fill in the gaps for each other. You'll say things in ways I've always wished I could, and for now I'll be glad to have shared a perspective that meant something to you. Thanks for taking the time to read, it means a lot.
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HolyHeroine Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for sharing your words with us, and you're very welcome. 
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chibi-demon-angel694 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very nice! :)
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MineralAccident Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you for thinking so.
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chibi-demon-angel694 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome! :hug:
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lintu47 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Congrats on the DD! :dalove:
Have a nice day! :heart:
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MineralAccident Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Student Writer
Though I always question deserving honors like that, I definitely count myself lucky. Thanks, and you have a wonderful day too.
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lintu47 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure, thank you :happybounce:
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