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Wooden dinosaurs can be coaxed
To follow, if they know you, whispering,
A voice of drapes gently shuffling,
"Be good, son," and they do
Know you.

Tell my hostile nerves,
Swayed by a red and wintered wind,
Perfumed by the smell of old
Shirts, "Be good, son." Would you?
Tell them.

I heard you, when your light yawned
And limped down the horizon, descending,
Like a dull shadow over your bleached face,
Heavy on your wet eyes, fading, whispering,
"Be good, son."
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The white fingered words I hear from another room, on occasion, while dreaming. I always wake saying the same thing after these words fill my head. "If only I knew how."

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`Kneeling-Glory Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hello! :wave:

I have used your beautiful deviation as part of my title poem project entry, found here: [link]

Have a great day! :heart:
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*MineralAccident Mar 3, 2013  Student Writer
Kind of you. That was lovely.
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